[IGSTK-Developers] Paper Draft, my edits

[Stephen R. Aylward]

Attached are my revisions on top of Brian's.

I think the paper is evolving very nicely.

I have one general concern, what is the message we are trying to 
present?   Right now the paper is a collection of software development 
processes and software patterns that address reliability.  I suggest 
that the intro and conclusion state that the intent of the paper is to 
present software development processes and patterns that address 
reliability for surgical guidance, and that the IGSTK toolkit has been 
developed to provide those processes and patterns.   I think a paragraph 
in the intro and in the conclusion will help immensely with it.  You 
need to prepare the audience for what they are about to read.

Stephen


M. Brian Blake wrote:
> Kevin G.,
> 
> Must say that this paper is coming together. This will be a great source for the project even if IEEE Computer does not like it, for whatever reason. 
> 
>   I added a closing paragraph to the requirements section and some edits here or there. I hope you are able to merge them in automatically. I will also have a few cycles tomorrow morning to spend some time going through the paper some more.
> 
> -Brian
> 
> M. Brian Blake, Ph.D
> Associate Professor
> Georgetown University
> Washington, DC 20057
> mb7 at georgetown.edu
> http://www.cs.georgetown.edu/~blakeb/
> 
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