[Fwd: Re: [IGSTK-Developers] Paper Draft, my edits]

[Kevin Gary]

Stephen,

Many thanks for your comments, I am looking at them now. Unfortunately I
have not done a good job at CM of the document, some of the sections you
added edits to have been reworked some already. That is my fault and I
apologize. I will send out the latest before the meeting.

You are correct that the paper does not flow well from the application
space into the software engineering space. KC has an action to provide a
summary/conclusion, and I have an action to rework the material on page 3
that transitions to the software engineering/reliability issues. We hope
to do that today.

Thanks,
Kevin G.


Stephen R. Aylward wrote:
> 
> Attached are my revisions on top of Brian's.
> 
> I think the paper is evolving very nicely.
> 
> I have one general concern, what is the message we are trying to
> present?   Right now the paper is a collection of software development
> processes and software patterns that address reliability.  I suggest
> that the intro and conclusion state that the intent of the paper is to
> present software development processes and patterns that address
> reliability for surgical guidance, and that the IGSTK toolkit has been
> developed to provide those processes and patterns.   I think a paragraph
> in the intro and in the conclusion will help immensely with it.  You
> need to prepare the audience for what they are about to read.
> 
> Stephen
> 
> 
> M. Brian Blake wrote:
> 
>> Kevin G.,
>>
>> Must say that this paper is coming together. This will be a great 
>> source for the project even if IEEE Computer does not like it, for 
>> whatever reason.
>>   I added a closing paragraph to the requirements section and some 
>> edits here or there. I hope you are able to merge them in 
>> automatically. I will also have a few cycles tomorrow morning to spend 
>> some time going through the paper some more.
>>
>> -Brian
>>
>> M. Brian Blake, Ph.D
>> Associate Professor
>> Georgetown University
>> Washington, DC 20057
>> mb7 at georgetown.edu
>> http://www.cs.georgetown.edu/~blakeb/
>>
>>
>>
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