[IGSTK-Developers] paper draft

[Luis Ibanez]

Hi Kevin,

Please find attached my comments to the paper.
A small set of references was added at the end.

The modifications are highlighted in Markup.


   Thanks


      Luis



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Kevin Gary wrote:
> All,
> 
> Attached is the latest draft of the working IEEE Computer paper. I would
> like to send this in by the deadline extension date we were given (this
> Thursday), and there are a few more things to do:
> 
> 1. Need a summary/conclusion section (KC and KG)
> 2. Need a better figures 1&2 (if at all - can we use 4ViewswCT screenshot?)
> 3. Clean up references and figure captions (KG)
> 4. Select and describe one example application (KC)
> 5. Review Architecture section (DG & LI)
> 6. Open Source sidebar (RA)
> 7. SO Representation brief section description (JJ)
> 8. Requirements wrap-up paragraph (BB)
> 9. Final review, paring down, and submission (KG)
> 
> We are running a bit long still, so in your reviews if there are sections
> that can be shortened/removed, please recommend them to me. Rick, we may
> not be able to fit the open source theme in, but I would still like to
> push it as a possible sidebar topic for the paper when we discuss with the
> editor. I think it is important.
> 
> Thanks!
> Kevin G.
> 
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